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RE: 300 words short story- Mistaken Identity
I felt a little let down by the last paragraph. These facts “here’s why they killed him” don’t really make it seem like a story, but more like a newspaper article. It’s very good imagination you have, but you were let down in the telling of it. I would have put more thought into the way and order that the tale was told.
You state it all too well @swissclive. The story required to play out itself without having to be helped!
Thank you very much @swissclive...will put a twist to the story next time.