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RE: Unsaid

in #story-300words7 years ago

Who hasn’t had a crush on someone who is forbidden? A teacher, a family member, a priest, the au-pair, someone’s husband, an auntie, a student, a patient, the doctor, someone from a different religion, someone of the same sex? How often is the feeling mutual? I think this kind of experience happens all the time.

It makes me think of Olivia Newton John’s song “I honestly love you”. One of the lines goes like this: “There you are with yours, here I am with mine. We both know this moment should be ended in a kiss”

Upvoted 100% for the most romantic story so far, and told so well with perfect English and well laid out. Tough to squeeze it into 300 words, but you did it!

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I just looked up that song. And how it mirrors this story!

[Maybe it was better left unsaid],

for Claire's sake!

And for Jeremiah,

And you shouldn't blow the chance
When you've got the chance to say

Strange i didn't even know of the song. I just added it to my collection!

I am honored, again, @swissclive. For everything!

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