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RE: 300 words short story- Mistaken Identity

in #story-300words7 years ago

This is a good story. Some editing could make it much better.

Don't start with character background, jump right into the story, already underway. The problem with the exposition in your ending is that it's at the end. The ending needs to hit like a punchline, not explain the story that came before it.

I hope these comments are constructive. Congrats on publishing!

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Thanks alot I really do appreciate this... The criticism is constructive enough to make me do much better next time. Thanks

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