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RE: After the ball. Incredible story
The piece is good. I suggest some corrections, though. I hope they help
But the necklace is exactly in your house! exclaimed the lady. - Say (sure), you did not throw anything into the trash when you came? You were very tired, after all?
The last paragraph is a little difficult to understand. You might want to improve it.
Otherwise, thanks for the work.
And by the way can you share with me the moral of the story? I am still trying to make it out. Thanks again.
English is not my native language, I'm afraid there are a lot of mistakes here :( But I'll try differently.
Oh! well enough. I understand. Don't worry. You are much better, given that circumstance. You will certainly improve. Thanks.
I get the point. Agatha Christie writes novels in which she solves mysteries. She helped the girl solve this one. I agree the ending could have been improved. The author needed t spend more time on it.
Thank you, you understood correctly :)