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RE: Breeders: Welcome to the Future (SciFi Short Story)
Hi @byn, good way of telling a story. By reflecting back on what happen to Hank was good. Your story was easy to digest and understand. You have a very creative and imaginative thinking in order to write a story like this. I can finished your story in 10 minutes because of it attracted my attention. Hope more coming from you.