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RE: IFC S2R9 - LOVE FOREVER

in #steempress5 years ago

I've written a bunch on love, but this resonated with me the most when I read the new contest. Hope it resonates with you too.

Great poem and sentiments! It definitely resonated a lot with me as well.

Roses smiled as we walked by

Love that line. :)

You held my hand tight
Yet you wouldn't come back

:( I feel that one.

Frances Frances
Don't leave me
Frances Frances…come back
Then hours became days
Days became months
Months became years

Deep.. Was Frances the name of your love? That's the middle name of one of the women I fell for.. Which this poem reminds me a lot of in my own life.

This goes out to everyone who has ever felt love for someone, and somehow lost that love or that person, I've had friendships that meant the whole world and somehow life has just taken us so much apart that it's unbelievable, sometimes I wonder, why do we get so close only to get so far again,…strings?..why do good people die…? one thing I'm sure, no love is ever lost, for God is love and love is everywhere.

Thanks for sharing! And well said.. I highly resonated with both the poem and your words at the end. I often wonder myself.. How I could be so close to someone, and now I'm sort of just a stranger to them.. And yeah.. Why do the good people die so young or so much more unfairly than the predator immoral people? That bothers me a lot. Seems like the worst among us get everything they want, get huge mansions and private jets and live a long life, but the best among us.. Leave way too soon and don't get so many of the good things in life they wanted.It's unfair and I wish it was different.

I especially like your last line about love not being lost cause God is love and is everywhere.. Those are some great sentiments I highly agree with, even if it seems temporary or like it is lost sometimes, I think it's still there.. Forever. Each second is an eternity, each moment we experience it's own universe.

Great work man. Love your style.

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Love that line. :)

haha I do too..

Deep.. Was Frances the name of your love? That's the middle name of one of the women I fell for.. Which this poem reminds me a lot of in my own life.

Frances Frances
Don't leave me
Frances Frances…come back
Then hours became days
Days became months
Months became years

Actually, this part were based on reflection of true life event in my life with my mum 13years ago. She was everything in my life.

I especially like your last line about love not being lost cause God is love and is everywhere.. Those are some great sentiments I highly agree with, even if it seems temporary or like it is lost sometimes, I think it's still there.. Forever. Each second is an eternity, each moment we experience it's own universe.

Thank you so much, I'm glad this topic came by, I'm more glad that this means something to you.
This is an awesome review to my poetry, I'm so glad I chose it as my submission.

Go IFC!!!!

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