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I must admit, I found this entry disappointing. We've had some great responses to this challenge, and one of the things that has made them great was specificity. Your idea is, well, it's entirely generic. It targets no specific community, and brings no significant value beyond a possibly catchy name. I would urge you to look at some of the responses to the original challenge to see what people have been bringing to the table.

The post also had some serious issues in terms of style, grammar, and proofreading. For instance:

• "We want the community to support each other, so to avoid that people can exceed and get much more out of the token than it should, we would grant a number of tokens to each user that can use weekly, you can not vote the own content or redeeming the obtained tokens, these will be used to support the different people that each one believes deserves their support, the people who help the other members giving them support with their weekly tokens, will receive prizes from tokens that they can use

This is all one sentence. It should be a whole bunch of sentences. And some of it doesn't really make sense. "We want the community to support each other," is confusing. Did you mean people in the community? Or did you mean communities? You need to have something plural there for mutual support.

"so to avoid that people can exceed and get much more out of the token than it should." What? Exceed what? What is "it" in "it should"? I think you may be talking about stopping abuse?

"we would grant a number of tokens to each user that can use weekly" I think this one may just be missing the word "they" between "that" and "can."

I was also confused when the post was suddenly in Spanish for a bit of a paragraph. Why... why would you do that?

I would strongly urge you to edit your work more closely. I always want contributors to do better, and I'm sure you can. But you gotta put in the work.

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