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I could almost feel the spray. Awesome piece of fiction with a brutal touch, I loved it.

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it!


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As a lover of all things horror this was superb!! I'm so glad you went over your 5 minutes. And unfortunately a lot of sentiments in this story I can totally relate to... I can feel the satisfaction and relief from Bobby... wow!! Thank you!!

Thank you! I've been wanting to delve into horror a bit more. Just getting my toes wet... so to speak ;) Thanks for the comment.

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Dang this one is brutal! I think you walked a good line between gruesome and overkill

Thanks. I was having a gruesome kind of day, apparently.

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I am wishing that there were more hours in my day! It's the only excuse I can come up with as to why I miss so many of your stories. This one reminds me of how much I love the way you write.

haha! howdy Byn! This is a great one, I love it when jackasses get what they deserve! lol. As brutal as it is, it's a feel good story!

I love it! Go mower go! Kind of gave me an adults version of a Goosebumps story :p I imagined every bit of it, the gore, the ugly sights of the step dad, everything. Awesome writing!

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