The unforbidden hero- The haunted spider Fantasy Story Contest for Steem Monsters Common Card (My Entry for Week 5)
LONG VERSION
“Determination is the key success" that is what i say to myself when things get hard and the situation become hard and have been motivating me all this time. I live in species of spider world of have and have not (that is the poor and rich and powerful), I fall under the have not where everyday is war, competing food and all stuff of basic neccesities. Our society “xander" is a beautiful place for the rich and reverse is the case for the poor. We are only important in time of war, after that it's back to where you belong to. Lasler the ruler of xander, very evil. He kills and his fellow spider for food whenever he feels like.
This (inequality) i wanted to change and in doing this i can by myself achieve anything, i set out for better alternatives. I believe the best way is through revolution and i was looking for more people like me.Fortunately we were sent to war to fight against the neighbouring community but actually their main motive is to eliminate us mainly they believe thatthe more our population grow the lesser their safety but lucky we escaped.
Luckly for me this aid my ambition, we escaped and enter into a small town called the sittle.There we settle and i prey on their anger immediate and we started planning our revenge plan and we set by taking the nearest towns they posses.
As years went by we are becoming a big threat to them and our force has increase drastically, nevertheless i was the general leading the force with the aim of eliminating inequality this unknown to my fellows. In building our nation many wars was fought and many dead,those with children also suffer.
One day the envoy from xander came with a message to surrender or they kill my wife and my only child.I was worried and devise a way to rescue them. I gather some very good and skill fighter and left in the night at full moon we were in xander deguise as their soldiers and enter into place where my wife and children where hold we were able to rescue them out the prison and entered into trap, I was caught with some soldiers while others escaped with my family.
The next day is my execution day with the other soldiers. lasler sitting across me looking at me as a prey.when the executioner was order to kill me, i stab him with the little dagger i hid in my hand unknown to him and head straight to lasler with soldiers after me. I killed lasler and i was stab by one of the soldiers and i was lying down thinking have i really achieve it or make it worse, will people know me as the bringer of peace or the bringer of more curse and i remember telling my son “follow my path”.
SHORT VERSION
A spider been haunted want to change the social order in an community
Very good story! I really liked the ending