Steemjetpoetry: Remnants of the Goddess

in #steemjet6 years ago

Remnants of the Goddess

Vandana Khanna
Let them come for what’s left:
a chorus of bone, river and soot.
Worthy enough. Holy enough.

Like all the others, singular—or not.
Wanting only for your name to blue
my lips and call it miracle.

Our love double-knotted, saddle-stitched
held the world together. Until it didn’t—
all the words you placed in me flushed
and faltered. From memory, I recited
their worn prattle—cut them clean
with my bite. The jungle we made in blame

grew and grew, fed on our melancholy.
Not even the birds knew to change their songs.


About the Poem



(gif pics by @Yanes94)

Remnants of the Goddess’ loosely draws from myths where goddesses are burned or asked to walk through fire to prove themselves pure, worthy, holy. I started to think about what gets left behind after all the storytelling is done. Whose stories get told, and ultimately, who gets to be called special, holy, and worth remembering.”

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Oh! @udezee, I love it! I feel very flattered that you have taken my drawing to make a poetry.
Thank you very much!

You love it! 😘😍 wow! haha it's my pleasure yanes94. Your art is a blast lol 👌💨
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Yes, of course I loved it, and thank you for praising my work.

My pleasure 😂

Enjoy your ride mate. Cool write up

Thank you bro.. This ride is a Jet IMO 😂😂

Lovely write up and I must I the drawing looks awesome too

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