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RE: My entry to the Steemit Winter's Collective Play (Under the Category: The Billion Dollar Secret )
This was a good read, @reewritesthings I love the way the story kept building up in intense drama the more I read. One thing I will share, be mindful of your sentence structure, the tense when to make words plural and also your punctuation. If you would ever like more help with this let me know.
thank you so much @rensoul17! This is my first time writing a short story, also english is not my first language that's why I commit some errors. Thank you, I'll surely ask you some questions.