Song - Alts Love It! for OZ's - "Steemit's got talent" contest! ---Lyrics by Ozmaster / Video and singing by WordSword (Second post first gone wrong)
Hello everybody.
This is my first (second due to a mistake I made of deleting my first post) blog post here. And as a matter of fact my first blog post ever.
I'm not on Youtube Twitter Reddit or any other social media. And it took me quit some time to start.
I'm not going to tell a lot about myself. Maybe later when I'm more comfortable or when it inevitable hihi
What I'm starting of with is a song in a songcontest from Ozmaster. He wrote the lyrics, I had to remove a few words to make it "singable". And now I hope I took out the correct words, so that the lyrics still reflect the meaning Ozmaster had in mind. If not you can tell me.
O.k. one more thing, I'm way to late, ah let it be. Here it is.
Greetings WordSword.
Ok thanks for the reply's.
I wished I could take one post out.
And have the other in dark grey letters in the feed (I believe it's called)
Well I'll let it be next post better, and hopefully with pictures in the feed.
(With "muted" I meant Light grey letters in the feed.)
Thanks for the feedback.
It is not muted
we love it !
They are both up an running.
STEEMIT LOVE IT
Both post and this hit plays on google, explorer and edge browsers.
Everybody love it
Wow! this is great!
I'm glad I didn't announce the end when it was supposed to be! :D
I love it wordsword!
Glad you like it.
I had some trouble with fitting in the lyrics.
I choose to leave out some words.
I'm not completely satisfied though. I will give you an example.
"I crushed my bitcoins into the wall."
I made that into.
'Crushed my bitcoins into the wall'
But I think in hind side that; 'I crushed my bitcoins to the wall' would sound nicer.
But my native language is not English so I don't know if you can say ;
"TO the wall" instead of " INTO the wall" .
I would like your opinion on that.
Maybe you thing I'm nitpicking too much. You can say that also.
The other thing I have is, that I don't know if I fully understand the meaning, I like to know if I understood it correct.
I will give you a short story on how I interpret the "story"
//You are trading coins, when they get low, you stay with it, you don't panic like others who cash out, in a panic drop, or when they have 2-3 times of what they put in.//
Let me know what you think. Leave it, or maybe change some things (make a second, slightly different, version with changes in the lyrics so that all sentences in the couplet start with "I .....")
Detail........... details..............
IT's PERFECT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I know I know I'm too critical about my "work" dear spouse ;)
But thank you for the compliment, and your help setting up cubase and powerdirector, so I could use them, and being you of course.
I delete the first post, and now I made a second one to correct it but it still looks like it's "muted".
Can I recover 1 of the 2 posts so that it shows up as a normal post?