100 Days of Poetry / Day 78 - Up to the skies / Prema nebesima - Original poetry

whack.science (71)in #steemitschoolpoetry • 7 years ago

- Up to the skies -

I am a circle
In this square world.
My mind dimensions
Are not compatible anymore.

My mind is a thief,
Stealing the truth.
I am no longer in control of
What I do.

I'm discovering the world
With my curious mind,
Giving heart to the heartless and
Eyes to the blind.

My actions brought me
In front of the judges -
Judging my life and
All I do.

One thing they don't know -
I really don't mind.
I know my direction,
It's up to the skies.

Up to the skies and
Into the Cosmos,
I will fly
On a rocket of love.

And when I get there
I will explode,
Just like a nebulae
I will light up your life.

Up to the skies,
Up to the skies.
That's why I will go
Up to the skies.

- Prema nebesima -

Ja sam kružnica
U svijetu kvadrata.
Mog uma dimenzije
Više kompatibline nisu.

Moj um je lopov,
On istinu krade.
Ne kontroliram više
Što radim.

Otkrivam svijet
Sa svojim znatiželjnim umom,
Dajem srce bezsrčanima
I oči slijepima.

Moje su me radnje
Dovele ispred sudaca
koji sude moj život i
Sve što napravim.

Jedna stvar koju ne znaju -
Mene to ne smeta.
Znam svoj smjer,
On je prema nebesima.

Prema nebesima
Pa u svemir,
Letjeti ću na
Ljubavnoj raketi.

A kada dođem tamo
Ja ću eksplodirat',
Baš kao maglica
Osvjetlit' ću tvoj život.

Prema nebesima,
Prema nebesima.
Zbog toga ću ići
Prema nebesima.

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7 years ago in #steemitschoolpoetry by whack.science (71)

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bigtom13 (64) 7 years ago

Another very nice piece of poetry in the series. I am still amazed that you have done it every day, in a row. Just a terrific accomplishment.

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whack.science (71) 7 years ago

Thank you brother! Your support is always welcomed and appreciated a lot! I'm just trying the best I can and today was a good day, considering time... Finally :D

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