100 Days of Poetry / Day 61 - Love is... / Ljubav je... - Original poetry
What is the real love?
Love is like a morning dew.
Love is the oasis of peace
On the desert in a storm,
Known by many but cherished by few.
A prison called your mind.
Love is something we all want to find.
Love is when you work for others,
for your sisters and your brothers.
Love is when you lose yourself
In another's fable.
Love is something unique,
It affects our spirit and physique.
The sweet lyrics that make us lose it.
Love is the sound on a dancefloor.
Love is something special,
Probably it's extraterrestrial.
It turns your grey skies into blue,
giving fluorescence to a hue.
Love is within us all,
Love is BIG, it's never small.
This is the real love.
Što je prava ljubav?
Ljubav je poput jutarnje rose.
Ljubav je oaza mira
Na pustinji u oluji,
Znana od mnogih, al' je njegovana malo.
Zatvora zvanog vaš um.
Ljubav je nešto što svi želimo pronaći.
Ljubav je kada radite za druge,
Za svoje sestre i svoju braću.
Ljubav je kada se izgubite
U tuđoj priči.
Ljubav je nešto jedinstveno,
Što utječe naš duh i tijelo.
Slatki tekstovi koji nas tjeraju da se izgubimo.
Ljubav je zvuk na plesnom podiju.
Ljubav je posebna,
Vjerojatno je vanzemaljska.
Pretvara ti sivo nebo u plavo,
Dajući fluorescentni odsjaj nijansama.
Ljubav je u svima nama,
Ljubav je velika, nikada nije mala.
Ovo je prava ljubav.
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Love is natural.
And Nature is Love!
I agree 100% Love is nature, love is free, freedom is nature :)
Good to read again from you!
Reading this makes me want to write another one like it like my version of this poem - maybe I will :) I'll tag you if I do :) Loved it thanks for sharing :)
Do it! :D Share Love, it's a healthy thing haha!
Thanks for your kind comment ;)
Interesting. I wonder if it could rhyme in both languages. That might require a bit of rewriting. :)
It's not rhyming :( It's hard to do that. I wrote this piece in English and then translated it...
Have a great day! ;)
This is such a great line, the poem is amazing but this line really stands out. Good job! 💚
Hahhhh you and your bitmoji haha I'm not gonna have a rest until I make it? Haha
Anyway, thanks for your word comment, but bitmoji was too much xD haha :p
Love is when you work for your kids... ( the work is real haha)
Love is when you hold your mother's hand knowing the countdown has begun....
Nice once @whack.science 😊
Oh the sweet little poem, brought me some mixed feelings :) :(
Thanks a lot ;)
This is incredibly beautiful. The entire thing was amazing and written so well. Love is beautiful once we know how to truly give and receive it.
Thank you very much for your kind comment. Yes, love is a special thing that needs special care ;)
I would only add - LOve makes you a better person :)