100 Days of Poetry / Day 48 - For all / Za sve - Original poetry

in #steemitschoolpoetry6 years ago (edited)

- For all -
Original poem by
Mr. Spacely

Empty days are laughing at us
as if they have never said goodbye.
In our sleep, we dream empty dreams,
when will happiness gift us our freedom?

In the thoughts of absent feelings
we can achieve one big Nothing.
With our feelings without thinking,
we find something worth living for.

We'll show the heart to hungry eyes
to forget the shivers in cold nights.
The power will be given to the fragile hands
to remember us what the real love is.

Without condemnation, fighting and bloody heads,
let's remember what it gave us.
The Real Love fights until the end
with the shield of freedom, for all human rights.




-Za sve -
Original poem by
Mr. Spacely

Prazni dani smiju nam se
kao da nikad nisu ni rekli zbogom.
U snu snivamo prazne sne,
kada će nam sreća podariti slobodu?

U razmišljanjima odsutnih osječaja
postignuti možemo jedno veliko Ništa.
S osječajima bez razmišljanja
nalazimo ono nešto vrijedno življenja.

Gladnim očima pokazat' ćemo srce
da zaborave bol u hladnim nočima.
Krhkim rukama dati ćemo moć
da nas sjete što je ljubav prava.

Bez osuda, borbe i krvavih glava,
sjetimo se što nam je ona dala.
Ljubav prava bori se do kraja
sa štitom slobode, za sva ljudska prava.



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Wow.
Best poetry brother
Great work @whack.science

Thanks bro! ;)

Don't worry about the thing, 'cause every little thing's gonna be alright :D <3

The last stanza is absolutely genius and it came out nicely in both languages 💚

Thank you :)) and I agree, the last stanza is my favorite too...

Ljubav se bori za sva ljudska, a i prava univerzuma :))) Lijepo bas.

Hvala mandala! Tako je, bori se za sve!

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