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RE: 100 DAYS OF POETRY: DAY 50 - For of the women I am called
The first two stanzas flow really well and over all this peace is classically beautiful. I feel that the following stanzas snag a bit and I will revisit later on today and see if I can give you a better analysis am still half awake right now :P
Nice. I'm submitting this one in class today. 😎
Ok then we can discuss it then I might be a little late so wait until i get there <3
I edited it a bit. Not sure if the last stanza works a little better now.