All caught up in the game Majestic -Day 82 of the steemitschool 100 day writing challenge by @d-pend

in #steemitschoolpoetry6 years ago (edited)

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In the early morning hours I relish in the beauty of my queendom
lush canopy of green, sheltering roof to many a squirrel
fireflies perform their last dance before a stretching sun sends them off to bed
crickets play the last tune before the riffraff wakes and ends my glorious reprieve from their presence
magical moments sprinkled in dew let me imagine a world without Worldkillers and Zombies
feel the cool humid kiss of dawn on my skin as the wind plays with my hair
As red hits the sky bathing all in shades of pink,
I sink into shadows left from night and wait for dusk to play the song again.

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I love the way you betray dawn here, very original and creative. Fireflies being sent to bed, crickets playing their last tune, magical moments sprinkled in dew, a cool humid kiss - all beautiful imagery.

There are a couple of lines that confused me. Most of the poem seems to welcome the dawn of a new day but the phrase about the riffraff waking and ending your reprieve, as well as sinking into shadows left by night and awaiting the dusk indicates an aversion to the day.

On the other hand the dissonance is intriguing and poetic in itself. And since dawn is only a transition and not actually day it works to show some love for it.

Thank you for your appreciation. At the moment my keyboard is broken so please forgive this short noting crafted from cut and pastes. It is not day that is the issue but the most of the people inhabiting it.

Hi this is bot belongs to @sapphic

You are obviously on her author upvote whitelist, (which means you are pretty special), or your post passed the threshold of her algorithm.

Either way she will be along shortly to read your post, ponder it and leave a lovely comment.

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magical moments sprinkled in dew let me imagine a world without Worldkillers and Zombies

I feel ya. 😎

BTW. Your invite to the LGBT Discord is expired. I was going to check it out. 😜

ooh let me fix that

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