This is cautionary tale of morality and ethics. I don't know if English is your mother tongue of if you speak some regional dialect. I've perceived some in several of your poems some departure from the standard British or American grammar.

One important message that does manage to come across from this poem is the fact that some people consider themselves to be successful even when that success fills their life with stress, enemies or a diminished health.

What you call peaceful success is, to my opinion, the only real success.

Great message.