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RE: Steemit School Poetry 100 Day Challenge #71--The Traveling Mind
Reading a poem that talks about the unsteadiness of the human nature and the and the taunting memories of yesteryears, I'm sure must do a thing or two the emotions of any reader.
The irregular lines pattern is cool as it encourages a reader to focus more on the lines.
But don't you also think the end punctuations are actually unnecessary, as the lines are not joined after all?