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RE: 100 DAYS OF POETRY: DAY 89 - Wanton Me
It is good to see you are still at it man. It has been a while since I checked in on you. Great rhymes. I always admire works that do this. Any pointers for someone like me who is lacking in that department?
Make the first line strong and to the point, and Musical, and then you just build off of it. If it becomes labored, take a break, and then go back. Or start over again.