DAY 54 "original"
Originality spat me out
They don't know what i am about
Thinking I'm one of them
Hypnotizing and persuasive
They are;
Wanting me to sing their anthem
Then they become coercive
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One thing i know though
Is i am as real as i can get
At least there is
No made in China
Carved on my chest
Now they know
I am not fake like them
I am not fazed by them
And I'm definitely not
One of them
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Lovely once again.
I like this part especially
It speaks volume..Well-done buddy
Thanks friend
Smile...at least there is no made in China carved on my chest..
Yeah bro originality all the way
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STOPhey @ehisoria we're in the same group in the poetry challenge. I'm assigned to give you feedback on one of your poems this week.
I like both the strong message and the humour in this :) and speacially how you could make them coexist ;)
Did you know that the Chineese industry can do even higher quality than any other industry. Many big companies like apple and sumsung... make their delicate products in china. So even though "Made in China" conveyed strongly what you ment to say, because of it's reputation, it's not really a sign of duplicata or low quality in most of the cases in reality. By the way I'm not chineese, I'm just shoing off some informations I have lol
That being said, I don't think it's a good idea to breack your poem with a photo in the middle. It would've been better if the photos were in the top and the bottom of the post.
I also suggest that you do your best to attend the poetry class. It's every Monday, Wednesday and Thursday at 5pm GMT we're learning a lot everytime ;).
Hmmm about the pictures I'll definitely do that and thank you for the information about China and it's products really appreciate it
And about the made in China why I used it is simply because that's the only place I know stuff are made thanks once again and I'll try my best to attend poetry classes