Wow @corderosiete this is excellent! You must have a poetic soul, my friend, because it does not come off as the writing of a beginner.

I really enjoyed it in both spanish and english, though as English is my mother tongue, this is where I could see the brilliance in full force. Stanza two really gripped me in these lines:

the sea, brave ally that does not bend his freedom,
his screams and his violent air
caresses the nakedness of the body.

I also love that you are using your own photographs. It gives this piece an authenticity that can be sensed. I'm really blown away by your work as a Beginner.