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RE: The man who cheated his nightmares: Day 6 of 100 days Steemit School Poetry Challenge
Loved this poem, @sammynathaniels, you did a great job creating an atmosphere of unease and an almost palpable fear.
The effort that went into the aesthetic shape in the first stanza was plane to see and was an interesting foreshadowing representation of your next stanza, internalizing a blissful thought and setting to combat the outside pressures.
Thought you did a great job with this one, mate, thank you for sharing.
Poetry is a language used to express inner thoughts and fear .... Glad you loved it