I love that this piece converses in contrasts and operates in keeping the reader aware that they need to check their footing - so much of each stanza focuses on building an image, then the turn to catch you off guard.

until the last two stanzas, of course, when you buck the trend and have an entire stanza set up the turn, it's all quite fun.

The approach is a lighthearted and incredibly refreshing piece and it's just a super pleasant read. Thank you for sharing, @prydefoltz.