enjoyed the progression this poem paints of the growth of life, from the beginning of the womb to the end of our lives.

I also appreciated that all of the progression of the narrator, the soul in this piece is from one full of a rash and brash demeanor, to a being unable to find solace in death, some type of divine reckoning.

A dun read, @ayahkasih, thank you for sharing - always a fan when I get to read your pieces.