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RE: (Steemit School Poetry 100 Day Challenge: Day 10) BE A YOU
This is my favorite poem that I've read in the beginning poet category since I started reading the poems in this challenge. Great job. I especially like this stanza:
be a wise,
royal high, beautiful eyes
the flower’s blooming in spring
changeling gnome carved from ice
I think your use of imagery and sound manipulation is highlighted by the abandoned in which you use the English language to express yourself. Keep it up.
Thank you, @acousticsteveo 😊