GRAYER: The lost magical planet. Chapter 1

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PREFACE 

Grayer born in 2015 during a really important era, those days some words start to pop up and flow like a river, those words created a planet lost in the galaxy, but with a really peculiar vibe. Grayer become a place to save those feelings, is kind of a place in my own mind also, a joyful one, this words are also dedicated to those who really love being part of positive changes and cannot forget their own light.

CHAPTER 1: Grayer.

Since Onka the supreme leader of the planet Grayer came to that place, it became a gray, silent, orderly and lifeless place. The inhabitants little by little became a kind of beings that follow patterns, work, sleep, eat and work again, just that... because  in their minds there was not a spark of fun and happiness.

The streets of Grayer are very quiet, no one makes noise, all are limited to perform their work with great caution, perfection and without creativity. Grayer is a perfect place but without the perfection of living, gray became their most important color, everything was... well all gray, not everything but most of it. The life in Grayer was really "pacific" and aparently perfect but come on! This Universe is not that way... Something is happening here.

Onka is an ant with telepathic powers, he grabbed Grayer under manipulation and lies, one of the things that he loved about that planet was that they did not have books, not sure why, maybe because is lost in the galaxy and the grayerians have little contact with other civilizations, the same Onka arrived at Grayer by mistake after getting lost and running out of fuel in his spaceship.

Onka began to sneak into the minds of the Grayerians under manipulation, telling them that he knew how to take them to great wonders and to know new worlds the grayerians didn't know yet. His telepathic powers revealed to him that all the inhabitants were magically connected by the thought that when he managed to enter the minds of a few he managed to get into everyone's mind, soon the Gayerians only thought about work, about their problems, they did not fall in love anymore, they have not seen new babies for a long time, the children grew up and the schools were almost empty. The mind is a very powerful weapon and Onka knew it because it managed to completely dominate the inhabitants of this small planet.

Every day this grumpy ant roamed the streets of Grayer visiting its managers, normally, influential citizens from whom he could intervene in the minds of others.

Greetings Mego Caban - said Onka
Greetings Supreme Chief.
Today's battle is to ensure that each grayer citizen is better and better in their jobs, resting too much will not give us honor, everyone must concentrate on themselves and forget about the company, there will be time for that when we are the most influential planet in the galaxy . - Onka affirmed -.
If Supreme Chief, I will get the message to everyone. - said Mego Caban, a character very respected by the grayerians -.


Each day, Onka, visited all its influential citizens repeating phrases that all obeyed without hesitation with the goal of becoming the most important one day.

Onka, a connoisseur of the mind, knew how to block his own so that grayerians would not discover his real intentions, as simple as all grayerians would age and die for him to have complete dominion and a planet just for him. Grayer was perfect, he was almost lost in the galaxy, it was a small planet, with few inhabitants and with an innocent personality due to its isolation, but Onka had to change in the grayerians its warmth in the treatment, kindness, its beautiful landscape, its intense joy and the union as a nation was really strong because everyone was as one due to its magical mental connection.

Grayer will be mine at all costs, this place will be just for me, here nothing and nobody will be able to bother me and i will be the owner of a whole planet. In mine i am considered small as a worthless ant, with the same benefits and powers as other ants, nothing is special for me, nobody remembers me, i am one of the bunch but in this place i can dominate and command, they consider me special and wise, they will do everything i tell them. - Onka said to himself -.

Onka lived in a small palace on the outskirts of the most populated center of Grayer, he lived alone, those who managed to enter were informants of the activities and advances on the planet and its surroundings, what most disturbed the Supreme Chief was that on the planet new visits to part of his, then, his plans for domination could be affected, however, had spent many years and no signs of ships flying over the surrounding space but could not be neglected.


Mr. Supreme chief, there are signs of changes in the climate, we will have to protect ourselves from volcanic storms and the plague of Piragutes that threatens the obtaining of food - reported Runx, the chief spokesman of the headquarters -.
Where in Grayer are these threats? - Onka asked -.
Sir, they are in the lands of light, in the south of Grayer, "Runx replied.
So, here where we are, the influence would be minimal, as i deduce - Onka said -.
Yes sir, that's right - Runx replied -.
Very good Runx, i will take all the necessary precautions to avoid and minimize these threats to the south. You can retire. - Onka said.


Obviously his intention was contrary, he did not intend to do anything to protect the Earth from the Light, this territory was the one that had cost him most to dominate, since the grayerians of light had the special ability to cultivate the earth with beams of light that they came out of their hands, they were closer to their territory than many of the other grayerians. They cultivated a flower that had a small sun attached to its pot that gave them life, it was a magnificent flower they called Solara, which has healing powers used throughout Grayer as a medicine, but many say that their powers go beyond and you do not even know the origin of the plant.

Onka managed to dominate them in the territory of light, promising that after they gathered the necessary resources to build ships, they would meet a sun so huge that they could not get close to looking at the light it emits, imagining such a scenario filled them with a enormous emotion and soon they ignored all the premises that they heard from the Supreme Chief.

If there were threats in the territory of light, was perfect for Onka, because, he knew that although they were few amount of people, they possessed an incredible capacity to create liberating thoughts, more than to cultivate and fertilize the soil with his own hands. The grayerians of light were strange but very happy and had special resources that allowed them to create things that only they could do and that others admired a lot.

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Soon CHAPTER 2 (;

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