Well same way as you marvel at other writer's work and shake your head at yours, these writers would read your post here and feel their work was crappy. It's more about the tone or soul of what you have written, how much of your voice is felt from what you have written. People still like to hear the sound of a human away from the marveling words of a renown writer, who amongst other things may be making a showy display of word-play. And there weren't errors in your writing. Your little cause as it appears right now is a noble. You have a vision and it is graduaLly attainable! And yes, you have made a way on steemit regardless of how you have written cos even ion today's internet where everything appears bot-like, there still exist humans who want to exist with other humans!