Yaay! Tuesday! I will devour it with my ears.
Well Mike did a fantastic job. When I was far too young I watched Desperado. That was a scene which made an imprint on me, this super weird awkward guy (Buscemi) walks into a bar and describes a mysterious badass dude who takes everyone out in a gun fight. I loved it all. Theres something so intriguing about awkwardness when theres a confidence too. Like how Big Hands really pushed the story on his boss.
I think you crafted really interesting characters, all of them have some little quirk or hidden agenda...