Interactive Short Movie Script - Day #2

in #steemit6 years ago (edited)

Basicly we will write and develop a short movie script together! That's right we will do this together. Of course, there will be a main story an synopsis but script will be change with your comments and ideas. So, every user who will suggesting or contubuting will have creative writer title in the complated script. Steemit is a social media and offering a funding system for personal or community projects. So, I want to use my part for a creative product with you guys.

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CategoryAction, Drama, Noir
LocationTurkey

INT. INTERROGATION ROOM -- DAY


BLACK & WHITE SHOT

Cemil is assaulted. It is red where he bleeds. There are couple drops of blood on the table. Metin is leaning on the wall, smoking. Asım comes in.

METIN
I took on all night long but the asshole did not admit.

CEMIL
(mumbling)
I... didn’t...

Metin puts out his cigarette on the drops of blood on the table.. Asım pulls off his coat and rolls up his sleeves.

METIN
He will be referred to prosecution tonight.
We do not have much time, but you will find your way.

Asım approves with his head. Metin gets out of the room. Asım sits in front of Cemil. Lights a cigarette.

ASIM
Talk. Why did you kill him?

CEMIL
I didn’t kill anyone.

Asım glare at Cemil while smoking his cigarette.

INT. CAPTAIN HAKAN’S OFFICE -- DAY


BLACK & WHITE SHOT

Hakan is working in his office. His coat is hanging on coat hanger. Asım gets in. Asım is in the mopes.

CAPTAIN HAKAN
Come here Asım. What happened with questioning?

ASIM
He spoke chief.

CAPTAIN HAKAN
How did it happen?

ASIM
Yasar owed Cemil. While he was trying to
discourage him a little bit a struggle started
between them. At that moment while Yasar
was trying to escape he fell down and hit his head.

CAPTAIN HAKAN
So, he accidently killed himself, is that so?

ASIM
Accourding to what Cemil said. We are
waiting for the records of the city surveillance
cameras in order to confirm.

CAPTAIN HAKAN
Let’s hope that it turns out to be like what
he said. Or else one murder will lead another.

ASIM
You are right chief.

Asım can’t help looking at Hakan’s colorful coat on the hanger.

CAPTAIN HAKAN
(laughing)
Though it is bad for you guys, your
bonus salary seems to be a dream. Huh?

Asım pulls a long face. COP-1 knocks the door and comes in.

COP-1
Chief, the car is ready, we are
transferring the accused to prosecution.

CAPTAIN HAKAN
Asım go with him. Use the back door.
The crowd in front might attempt to lynching.

Asım approves with his head and they get out of the room with COP-1.

INT. HOMICIDE DEPARTMENT -- DAY


BLACK & WHITE SHOT

Asım gets into the office in a hurry and takes his coat. There is a text message from Ye¸sim on his phone. It says "Don’t forget to shop". Asım puts his phone in his pocket and walks at the door. COP-2 gets into the office and pass a CD to Asım.

COP-2
Detective the records you expected are here.

Asım takes the CD and attached it. COP-2 gets out of the room. Asım saw in the records that Cemil is innocent. The incident happened as Cemil said. Asım pulls a long face. Staring at the CD for a while. Asım breaks the CD and gets out of the office.


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So, I share 3 scene from the script. All of them is inside. Now we know mor info about our story world and caracters. We know what is mean colors for example. I want to show What do you want to read or see after that point? What is your ideas? Please, share with me and make this script better. Thank you for reading, see you!

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