Interactive Short Movie Script - Day #1
Basicly we will write and develop a short movie script together! That's right we will do this together. Of course, there will be a main story an synopsis but script will be change with your comments and ideas. So, every user who will suggesting or contubuting will have creative writer title in the complated script. Steemit is a social media and offering a funding system for personal or community projects. So, I want to use my part for a creative product with you guys.
- Check this : Steemit Crowdfunded Interactive Short Movie Project
| Badges | |
|---|---|
| Name | Colors |
| Category | Action, Drama, Noir |
| Location | Turkey |
So, yesterday I was shared project post, synopsis and first page. There was no comment yet, but I think it will in time. So, I will share another page in the script and after that we will talk about it (I think no boday read this post, if you read just say Merry Christmas).
BLACK SCREEN
INT. HOMICIDE DEPARTMENT -- NIGHT
BLACK & WHITE SHOT
There are only Asım(30’s, male) and Metin (30’s, male, stern) in the office. Asım nod off. Metin puts his feet on his desk, reads the newspaper. We will see the date of the day. Captain Hakan(50’s, male, classy, stern) opens the door and goes inside. Captain Hakan’s coat and tie are colorful. Metin quickly collect oneself. Asım wakes up.
There was a murder in Beyoglu. The officers
that patrol caught someone stand over the body.
Murder?
Bring the suspect and query him. If it is a
real murder, a bonus salary for the each one of you.
(mumbling)
Bonus salary?
Asım imagines herself in a colorful suit, entering the police station. Everyone is applauding him. Some of them likes Asım’s jacket. Asım continues to walk proudly.
Is that clear Asım?
Asım startled and recovered. He glanced round gapingly.
Yes, yes chief. Understood.
Captain Hakan leaves the room. Asım and Metin are joyful.
EXT. STREET -- NIGHT
BLACK & WHITE SHOT
Asım gets out of his car. There is a crowd gathered at the end of the street.He walks towards them with quick steps. Policemen are tries to keep the crowd away. Asım push his way through the crowd and sees the body. A middle aged man is lie in a pool of blood. Blood infected places are red. His tie is colorful. Asım bends down and takes the man’s pulse.
He’s dead, is not he? What will happen
now? What if it never stops?
Asım starts to search the body’s pockets. Cemil(20’s, male) is watching whats happenning through the police car.
(Looking at Cemil)
He’s watching us.
The crowd suddenly seethingly starts to clamor. They want to lynch Cemil in the police car. Policemen hardly hold them back.
I am going to the station, bring him
too before anything happens.
Yes sir.
Asım pushes his way back to his car through the angry crowd. Asım gets into his car and moves away.
INT. ASIM’S HOME -- DAY
BLACK & WHITE SHOT
A middle class house. Only few things. Asım’s wife Yesim(30’s, female) and his daughter Mine(6, female) preparing the dining table for breakfast. Asım is watching television. The Television Announcer’s(30’s, male, large man) tie, and Ihsan’s(50’s, male, little man) vest is colorful.
Last night there was a murder after
exactly 13years later. Cemil Evsiz has was
taken into the custody on the charge of killing
Yasar Taylan while everyone had so many
questions in their minds. Today we will seek
for answers to those questions with messrs.
Ihsan Paralı. (turning to ˙Ihsan)
Yes, sir do you think the vaccines
are losing their effects?
(looking at Asım)
Breakfast is ready, let’s come.
Asım gets up and goes to the dining table. Television’s voice is still heard in the background.
It can be said conceivably. Besides, if
this is the case The Ministry of Health
will soon come up with the needed explanation.
Do you think this will continue?
Now there is this country in which nobody
committed murder for 13 years. A total generation
has been grown unaware of murder, claim lives.
If you go out there and kill someone in the streets
no one can tackle it.*
Dad, what is murder?
Asım pauses, they catch each other’s eye with Yesim.
An old disease, sweetie.
What kind of caution should citizens take?
˙
In fact, there is not much to do about it but...
Asım turns off the television and continues to eat his breakfast. They keep eating without talking for a while.
We are out of oil and detergent. Do not
forget to get some from the store at night.
Try to make do for couple days
until this case ends.
What if it does not? Until when
this will keep happening Asım?
Asım glare at Yesim and leave the table.
So, I share 3 scene from the script. 1 outside of place, 2 inside. All caracters intorduced. This is the most important think in a screenplay. You must be start with your main caracter. When movie start and a guy was show him self audience think "Ouv this is the main caracter!". That's why we start with Asım. He is our guy. And first pages of script is important for story arc. You must intruduce all your main caracters and give some information about your fiction world. For example in this script, my world black and white. So, what is your ideas? Please, share with me and make this script better. Thank you for reading, see you!
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