Yes, a small step in the right direction ! No problem for the feedback, I think a good discussion/feedback gives us invaluable information, food for thought. This is the only way to improve ! On that note, I would be happy when you have time to check out my blog - I am curious what kind of tips you can give me :)

P.S. Hard hitting truths is rarely a successfull strategy, you did well when you decided to write a follow-up :)