Actually, not a bad article. You complained in your other post about no one upvoting this or maybe even reading it. Part of the problem may be the tags you are using. One is steemit. Why use that? Everything here is steemit, isn't it? So it doesn't tell me anything. And I could make a case that using that tag should be reserved for articles about the platform. I'll grant you science. Not sure what academy has to do with anything. It has nothing to do with steem other than that you're hoping to get some. And the last one, writing, is also generic and not really the topic of your post. I would have used "electricity power power-generation tesla smart-cities". I don't know that this would have gotten you any more upvotes, but at least the keywords would be on point. Last but not least, maybe people just aren't interested in electricity and you have to look for another subject? This platform is still evolving and growing. As with anything long term, though, don't try it once and decide it doesn't work. There are not very many best selling authors whose first attempt at writing launched them to fame. They simply persevered.