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RE: Finishing the story @f3nix contest submission-Untitled
I see a lot of potential and evocative images. However, like those out of focus orbs in your story, I feel a bit lost within the sentences. Can you explain me a little? Is the professor capable of perceiving different layers of reality?
Yes, the professor was realizing he was dead actually, lol. Didn't convey that very well huh?
Perhaps, you could have exploited the open door and entering figure.. I don't want to influence the contest with my second part .. Hence I will properly comment after monday. You had probably the best idea so far.
Thank you very much, I am not making any edits, I want to keep it above board of course, but thanks very much, I really get tunnel vision in what I'm trying to say and lose perspective of what it is I am actually saying. Very helpful thanks again!
My pleasure, my friend.