Twenty-two Edition Lyric poetry contest prompt: Silk

in steembasicincome •  last month  (edited)

Una vez más me uno al concurso de @felixgarciap en su vigésima segunda edición de poesía lírica: Silk, invito a todos los que quieran unirse.

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Tú, rumiando tus soledades
aislado.
Yo, de cristal y seda
te contemplaba.


Te sentías observado
buscabas,
tu mirada
resbalaba de mi.


Inerte
intentaba hablarte
enredada
en mi malla traslúcida.


Gritaba el silencio
de las arañas perdidas
en redes humanas
enamoradas.

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You, chewing your solitudes
isolated.
I, of crystal and silk
I contemplated you.


You felt observed
you were looking for,
Your gaze
slipped off me.


Inert
I was trying to talk to you
entangled
in my translucent mesh.


I shouted the silence
of the lost spiders
in human networks
in love.

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Gracias amiga @evagavilan por tu poesia la cual tiene un cierre excelente:

Gritaba el silencio
de las arañas perdidas
en redes humanas
enamoradas.

Saludos

Gracias @felixgarciap, tú opinión es importante para mi.

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Hola @evagavilan

Felicitaciones muy especial para @evagavilan por tu hermoso poema.

Inerte
intentaba hablarte
enredada
en mi malla traslúcida..

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Muy agradecida @lanzjoseg, muy motivador el apoyo que recibo de ustedes. Es un honor participar en este concurso.

FANTASTIC photo!!!!
I try and try but never manage to capture spider webs with a camera.
Love it!