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RE: Steemit Art School: Negative Space Homework (Week 1)

in #steem-cartoon7 years ago

Heya @ivoryss thank you very much for participating in the Artschool!
I hope you had fun ;)

The homework looks absolutely great! Good job on that!

I do have to provide a little feedback/criticism .. I hope you don't mind! :)

I think you are on a fairly high level in terms of drawing and painting when i see how you do your pre-sketch and trace it, the hands and bodies look well constructed and the proportions seem to be right!

Eventhough that is great, it sort of beats the purpose of the exercise! :D
The exercise is about drawing the object by not drawing the object.
So we draw the line where the space surrounding the object meets the object.. not the space that the object takes.. makes sense? :)
I hope so!

I would love to see you give another shot at drawing the outline of the characters / hands but without a pre-sketch .. straight on paper! Bam! Do it! :D

Hope that makes sense, and i hope you give it another shot and participate in next weeks exercise!

Thank you!

Greetings
Rogier

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Hi @beekart! (≧∀≦) thank you very much for your compliment and feedback~

It makes more senses after you explained in details the purpose of this exercise. When I start sketching out the chairs I find it difficult to make it right because I'm too focused of the subject inner details rather than what I'm supposed to do (´Д` )

Then when I try to attempt 2nd and 3rd exercise, I try to minimize the sketch and just get the shape instead.

I do enjoyed the exercises and I'll do my best to toned down my mistakes in next exercise! \(^-^)/

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