Steemit Music League Challenge S2-R2/Dance Anthems - "Hourglass"

in #smlchallenge7 years ago

Hey everyone this is my entry for the Steemit Music League Challenge S2-R2/Dance Anthems. I took one of my most upbeat tracks and spit it with the chorus covered already (hopefully that's okay). I laid out two verses for this and I'll put the lyrics below

LYRICS
Woo yeah
I'm past that plastic
Shit trying get at
All my flows
She stoked
For the rolls of dough
I'm an IT kid
So I cracked the code
I broke it
I've been at this
Toking
While I practiced and worked the rhymes
Doing all this shit off my own dime
So they think I could give in
I could probably sign
I've been on my grind
I can't fill your glass
I've been filling mine
I was skipping class
Never find the answers
With the wrong questions
While under pressure
I started mess with
All the best shit
I've been searching
Looked within
And found the purpose
In this life
I’ve been trying to do right
But baby
Maybe tonight
We just might

2nd Verse
But I’ve been busy
With my business
Charting playlists
Tryna see who’ll play this
If you understand what I’m fucking saying
Then you should understand
This an understatement
Get with the times
Having revelations
I ain’t even tryna have this conversation
Why the hell you trying to go and complicate this?
You know I aint even one for confrontation
Fuck legislation
Then tell this nation
Let it resonate with
People making payments
In hopes they getting famous
They only care bout stages
End up faceless
Many fail to see
To really get somewhere
Gotta grind
Gotta bleed
Gotta give
To receive
It’s the contrast of life
Choose your time well
Before your last night
I’ve been saying this awhile
We all goin die

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Thank you so much following all four accounts :)

oooooooooooooooo that boy gone in.

This shit was smooth af brah. gotta keep on you more.

#thecut

eyyy, mad respect! I'll be posting raps everyday

Yea man, this was real straight... I felt like the second verse the flow seemed a little choppy right here

Tryna see who’ll play this
If you understand what I’m fucking saying
Then you should understand
This an understatement

Other than that, shit was on really on point man. Would love to hear you with an actual mic and shit and mix that beat in a bit more. Keep it up my man!

Ey respect, yeah I turn every single one of my songs into a rap if it's an original and this one is. I will release it as a single eventually with this cover art
Hour Glass.jpg

and by turn into a rap I mean like professionally record, mix, and master haha. I have hundreds of songs written waiting to record these days

That's what it's all about my man, writing writing writing. Keep it up my man!

The beat is awesome, good luck on the contest!

Thank you so much! I thought so too :)

Dope track and you have a really good voice!

Thanks so much! Will eventually make it a single :)

This vibe was really cool and upbeat, really easy to kick it to. Best regards in the sml Challenge!

eyyy thanks! I'll keep posting raps everyday :)

Ayyyyyy man this is so dope.

You got that smooth flow and the delivery (very MGK-esque) that makes the best of that dance beat.

"I'm an IT kid so I cracked the code." oooo get it

"Looked within. And found the purpose of this life." ayyyyyy

"Gotta give, gotta bleed, gotta give to receive. It's the contrast of life." Mannnn let's gooooo

This is such fire man excited to hear more of your music.

Much respect

yooo mad respect for the indepth look at my lyrics, I'm always working putting in the rhymes!

Yesssirrrr and heck yeah excited to hear more of those rhymes o weeee

Results of the #smlchallenge just announced as well

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