Right away, I am happy. I like this world! It is speaking to me. The upness and the weirdness are coming together in a lovely form of chaos! I am a big fan of the panning you have done wit your tune. I feel all the sounds and feel that have a good speration and they all seem to be in their place. perhaps a bit more eqing would help spread and make the sounds fit tighter. I myself always seem to have a lot of low end in my tunes. I mean, low end it the best! My little brother, seems to hae to much Hi-end in his tunes. At least that is how I feel from time to time.
I have now listened a few times, and i am feeling like you could get more out of your kick, and of it can sit better in the mix perhaps. I think the hi-end sounds actually sound right on for me. Maybe that bass needs a little more beef? I am just being picky. And I am, as I am trying to find what it is, that can make this tune dance a bit more.
I like it very much and each listen, it gets stronger.
i am a fan! i hope my rambling notes mean something to you. And or, if not, I can get behind that too! great work!!