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RE: A SHORT STORY: Overpopulation in Antares
@calluna - Thank you for gentle and kind critique. Yes, that is indeed a fuax pas of note! I guess I stubbornly ran with the ending in mind :(
I'm not a regular writer but I took up the challenge to see if there was a way to relate some of the issues of overpopulation to a child.
Thank you for an excellent contest. :)