Heat, An Erotic Freewrite (A Sexy Sneak Peek)

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Well, I've been writing a lot of erotica lately, but I've been stumbling over plot things, character things and just lots of little things. This week's freewrite definitely opened up some vein of inspiration, because after I wrote this, I then sat down and started a whole new erotica story based on this little bit of a beginning that the #weekendfreewrite inspired.

I'm only 5,000 words in thus far, but I'm thinking that maybe I have finally found my first actual erotica story that I want to try publishing as an ebook. I'm feeling all kinds of inspired and the story is HOT HOT HOT (writing steamy, explicit erotica isn't great for getting to sleep at night!) so keep an eye out for more on that... coming soon, you might say ;) and the following story is just the beginning of the foreplay!

For now, here is a sneak peek into what inspired me in the first place. I guess I had sex on the brain, because the prompts from this weekend all seemed to lead to that!

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The Big Teaser (this story doesn't get explicit... Yet.):

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"How do you do it?" she asked me. "How do you go on?"

“How do I go ON?” I just looked at her, confused for a second before I remembered. “Oh, you mean since John left me?” I smiled, trying not to laugh. “I think you might have a… slightly off kilter view of our marriage.”

“What do you mean?” Now it was Lisa’s turn to look lost. She apparently had no idea.

“Listen. Our marriage was not great. It was… pretty much non existent.” I touched her arm, because for some reason, she just looked traumatized by MY divorce. What was even going on here? “Seriously, Lisa, when he finally left, we hadn’t had sex in 11 months. Almost an entire YEAR of nothing. No intimacy. He slept in the guest room.”

“But… you guys…” She looked at me with a pleading look, “You guys were the ones who were going to make it, in spite of everything. He was perfect for you!”

“Ummm… I guess that’s on me. I should have been more real about us. John is a nice guy, he really is, we just weren’t right for each other, that’s all. LIsten, no offense, but I would really like to enjoy our night out. We never hang out and I don’t want to spend the entire night talking about my soon to be ex-husband. Besides, I've got something else I'd like to tell you about..."

“Oh, yeah,” Lisa was definitely in a strange mood. She was completely distracted and ot acting like herself at all. “Well, let’s get a drink for old times sake, okay? Maybe some hot guy will ask you to dance and you can get back in the game.”

I laughed and helped her up. Little did she know, I was already well back in “The Game” with a capital “T” and I was enjoying The Game far more than I ever had in my life. I wondered how much I could tell her before she’d freak out.

We had downed a couple of shots and were on the dance floor when He showed up. He seemed surprised to see me and I guess I had kind of hoped he’d be there… but still. Lisa had apparently found her inner bad girl and was totally into his flirting nature. If she only knew. I tried to warn her, but she looked at him and said, “Best not flirt with disaster, let it decide to commit.”

‘All right’ I thought… Lisa was even more single than I was at the moment, so she was free to do what she wanted. I figured we’d just see where things led. I did start to think that perhaps I should have clued her into what was up with me lately. I didn’t want her to find herself in the middle of… "things" and freak out.

It seemed like it was just a few minutes later when He was leading us to the back room of the club. That room that few people knew about. It was way in the back, down the hall, behind a nice solid soundproof door and one of those places that you had to know someone Big to even know it was there.

Lisa was nearly holding onto me to stand up, but seemed coherent as could be. She was definitely lusting after this guy and I knew that she’d be all over him the second she realized we were in private. He looked at me with a question in his eyes and I just shrugged. I knew Lisa used to LOVE to play around a lot, but it had been a while and we'd never gotten involved in something quite This different before. I told myself that we’d just have to see where things went.

He walked us into the back room and shut the door behind us. I think Lisa sobered up a little bit more at that point. We were in what looked like another bar entirely. There was a whole different vibe. Dark, sexy and just reeking with the feel of… heat. There was a bar along one wall and couches and what looked like big ottomans around the room. I knew that the furniture was a lot more than it appeared at first glance, but I supposed we should probably take it slow and see what Lisa thought of the whole idea. She was about to be introduced to my new world.

He went to the bar to get us drinks and LIsa turned to me, “Sooo… is this a secret club or something? That guy over there looks hot as HELL! What’s the deal here?”
I just said, “Well, if you’re really interested in finding out, just say hi to someone with a smile.”

Knowing Lisa like I did, I knew she’d jump in with both feet and she’d have a blast. It wouldn’t take her long to realize what was going on and we could see what happened at that point. If she wanted to leave, we’d head right out the door. If not… well, maybe Lisa and I would have a fabulous fucking weekend.

I watched as she sashayed herself across the room to the guy she had her eyes on and started flirting with him. She touched his chest, then his arm and suddenly he leaned down and whispered something to her. She nodded to him and he suddenly grabbed her hair and planted a deep kiss on her. His hand was grabbing her ass none too gently and she seemed to be quite into it.

He came back with our drinks and I nodded to the corner where Lisa was with the new guy. He smiled at me then and said, “So, you brought a fun friend for us to play with then? Why didn’t you tell me before?”

“I wasn’t sure if she’d be interested.” I was being honest, “I hadn’t even had time to bring up the subject with her tonight when you showed up, so I guess I just figured we’d play it by ear. She seems to be into it… I kind of figured she would be.”

He smiled that slow, hot smile at me then and pressed my back, bringing me to him. Leaning down to my ear, his hand was on my ass as he whispered, “So, my dear, are you ready to play for real this time? I could use a distraction tonight…”

I let him pull me even closer to him and moaned in his ear as an answer. I was definitely ready to play. I wasn't even completely sure what I was getting myself into, but I wanted to find out.

Little did I know what a phenomenal night we were going to have...

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Holy monkeys @byn. Can't wait to read the rest. Poor Lisa has no idea what she may be getting in to.

"Holy Monkeys" :) The best! Thank you... it's getting pretty wild and steamy over here ;)

Oh my... I am really looking forward to the next chapters. I love stories like this. I'm a 50 shades junky, read the series twice, I never read a book more than once.

I have never read the Fifty Shades series, but from what I've heard, I think you will really like what I've been writing ;) Thanks for the support!

Very good start! Being a teaser is a good quality for an erotic writer! For now, the temperature is warming but not hot yet. The premises are all there, thus! No need for nsfw tag...for now! Keep on writing, you have my attention (as many others, I think).

(P.S.: Here's the new prompt: https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-151-5-minute-freewrite-monday-prompt-medium)

Ha, I don't think I'll bother posting the real explicit stuff here.

I finished off my first short story/chapter of 18,000 words last night, though. This one was pretty easy to... um... 'flesh out' so to speak, but my explicit is VERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRY Explicit and I think it may need to be published somewhere else that I can publish under a pseudonym instead :)

Maybe the pseudonym can be a great idea! Besides, a well chosen pseudonym can be a teaser on itself for erotic literature. ;)

May sound strange, but I wrote some VERY explicit porn stories in my past, when I needed to spice up a long distance relationship ;) It was very funny!

It doesn't sound strange at ALL! Hell, here I am, a grandma and mother of five writing some explicit stuff. If I can do it.... ;)

Hmmm I shouldn't have read it this night. I wish i was the guy. I like trying new things too. A hot lady in a private bar sounds good to me.

It sounds pretty good to me, too! ;)

WTF .....
Please don't tell me that's were you stoping for now, can't you do a few more lines?
Please!!
I just wish I didn't have to end there, you got me so glued to my phone screen ...
Can't stop pitying Lisa though ...
Damn that's some good story...
It's off tha hook @byn
I don't like it, no I don't .... I looooooove it

Well, I have literally written over 18,000 words of this story (including rewriting this freewrite to make it a little more polished) this weekend and have come to a pretty nice stopping point now. I'm not exactly sure what I'm going to do with the story now, though.

A friend has offered to read through and edit it for me and I think I might honestly try uploading it as an ebook on amazon. I mean, I'd rather write than go work at a grocery store to keep food on the table. I don't know, though. I feel like I've been looking for inspiration to actually write a full out (long-short story?) piece of erotica and I feel like I've found it now... but now I'm not exactly sure what to do with it!

Just go with the flow @byn .... Honestly your a strong lady cus writing is not an easy task but hey!! Your good at it

Oh, and don't pity Lisa. She ended up having a reeeeeeallllly nice time. ;)

Now that's a relief .... Lol....
Tell us everything, leave nothing out, no stone ontourched...
Can't wait for the continuation ...

Oooh that sounds interesting. The ladies are the new attraction. Great writing!

Great start!! I'm looking forward to the next installment :D

Thank you! I'll post again soon :)

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