Secret writer : poetry without a title - Don't ask a poet what he means, tell him!
Hey guys, today the subject is completely different from wine (although a glass would help).
Today I found one of my poems, that was written... 12 - 15 years ago.
I found it in a draft old email address, without an addressee.
Every inch of me wants to make changes to it, but I won't...
(all pictures used are just to make the post more readable and are not related to the poem)
Your tender grace.
Beloved moments.
Your heavenly embrace.
Your look upon my body.
Your glance not worthy my description,
Turned me to insanity indeed.
I think of you yet once again…
You’re the cliché upon my heart,
The epic of my poetry.
My world, my love, my nature.
The religion in my head.
Your skin like Persian silk befallen upon my guilty eyes.
Just like an undiscovered precious stone,
That I am petrified to touch.
To speak my lips, I am afraid.
Scared not to hear you whisper back to me.
My opium, my drug, my illness, my imagination!!!
Yes, so in love I am – yet that
Love is trapped inside me.
Never to escape my thoughts.
I am not worthy to lay my hands upon this gem.
For this treasure is not mine.
Yet jealousy had driven me insane.
To be in love or not to be?
That is a poet’s question.
And to my luck the answer is never to be heard!
So for now I leave for you this:
My poetry, my message,
That is carrying my love.
Nice poem! Keep Steeming!
Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you
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Я пишу только на английском
That's some great poetry there. Thanks for sharing.
Thnaks, it means a lot, really...
I really enjoyed this read! Some amazing beauty within your words. With that I would like to share with you a little something I wrote earlier this afternoon. I do hope you enjoy this read.https://steemit.com/craigrant/@kellywin21/fire-raging-tornado Thank you for such a great read. Will be following for future posts;)
Sorry i saw it late. Will follow you from now on!
you are never too late! You have read it now;) and the read is all that matter;)
Wow, I liked the cliche and originality entwined with each other. You've got a poem that's been written and tried by many, how to describe your love and in multiple ways, you still find tons of original ways. Even the shakespeare quote is turned over once, replaced. I really liked the idea of a lover being someone's religion in their head. That sparked a lot for me.
Thanks for the open answer!
Thats great!