It is good, but not sure it works. The lead character is so racked with guilt and shame he seeks to make restitution but for the wrong reason. Not for the boy but to clear his own conscience. Therefore, a voice in his head saying 'Better Left Unsaid"' would give him a way to clear his conscience without doing anything.
Now that's a great little twist. This has possibilities given the music connection which makes it more personal to the lead as opposed to 'Better Left Unsaid' which is too generic. I could see this being position as follows... in spite of his conscience telling him it's 'better left unsung' he musters the courage to act in spite of it. Need to think about this one long and hard. Good on you!
It's a great title but probably not for this movie. Unfortunately, a voice in the lead's head saying 'Better Left Unsaid"' would give him a way to clear his conscience without doing anything.
Now that you mentioned that your lead is thinking very wisely in that concept of thought. Does kind of leave it open to suggest an out from dealing with the situations in a manner to do nothing at all. Lays the title out there too much to say, no story or dynamics coming at ya lol. Like the title though, maybe for another piece of work more fitting. Smart lead you got there, thinking it through
As I said above, it's a great title but probably not for this movie. Unfortunately, a voice in the lead's head saying 'Better Left Unsaid"' would give him a way to clear his conscience without doing anything.
It's a great title but probably not for this movie. Unfortunately, a voice in the lead's head saying 'Better Left Unsaid"' would give him a way to clear his conscience without doing anything.
It's a great title but probably not for this movie. Unfortunately, a voice in the lead's head saying 'Better Left Unsaid"' would give him a way to clear his conscience without doing anything.
Interesting. Not sure it works though. The lead character is so racked with guilt and shame he seeks to make restitution but for the wrong reason. Not for the boy but to clear his conscience.
that is good actually. someone copyright that before hollywood snags it.
It is good, but not sure it works. The lead character is so racked with guilt and shame he seeks to make restitution but for the wrong reason. Not for the boy but to clear his own conscience. Therefore, a voice in his head saying 'Better Left Unsaid"' would give him a way to clear his conscience without doing anything.
Better left unsung?
Now that's a great little twist. This has possibilities given the music connection which makes it more personal to the lead as opposed to 'Better Left Unsaid' which is too generic. I could see this being position as follows... in spite of his conscience telling him it's 'better left unsung' he musters the courage to act in spite of it. Need to think about this one long and hard. Good on you!
That is solid!
Unfortunately, a voice in his head saying 'Better Left Unsaid"' would give him a way to clear his conscience without doing anything.
Better Left Unsaid is golden, you got my upvote on that ingenious title, fits it nicely
It's a great title but probably not for this movie. Unfortunately, a voice in the lead's head saying 'Better Left Unsaid"' would give him a way to clear his conscience without doing anything.
Now that you mentioned that your lead is thinking very wisely in that concept of thought. Does kind of leave it open to suggest an out from dealing with the situations in a manner to do nothing at all. Lays the title out there too much to say, no story or dynamics coming at ya lol. Like the title though, maybe for another piece of work more fitting. Smart lead you got there, thinking it through
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THis is the best one IMO
As I said above, it's a great title but probably not for this movie. Unfortunately, a voice in the lead's head saying 'Better Left Unsaid"' would give him a way to clear his conscience without doing anything.
Good point
This! I would be so intrigued if I heard that title.
It's a great title but probably not for this movie. Unfortunately, a voice in the lead's head saying 'Better Left Unsaid"' would give him a way to clear his conscience without doing anything.
There are a few I like, this ranks up with them.
It's a great title but probably not for this movie. Unfortunately, a voice in the lead's head saying 'Better Left Unsaid"' would give him a way to clear his conscience without doing anything.
Interesting. Not sure it works though. The lead character is so racked with guilt and shame he seeks to make restitution but for the wrong reason. Not for the boy but to clear his conscience.