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Its slow and monotone.
That does not catch an audience. It may be good to put them to sleep, to say it bluntly.

Just trying to be helpful here.

I didn't find him monotonic. He stresses some of the words.

It was neither slow. At least it didn't appear to me.

how different people have different perspectives

I'm sorry but you're not. you're just making assumptions. what if I dont want to grow a big cold channel, but to have a small one with tight followership?

That has nothing to do with making an interesting speech or making an uninteresting, except you want to use it as a filter, which I dont think will work.

Anyway I have said my feedback, its on you to decide if you change anything. Feel free to give me feedback on my works.

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