That reads like something you could put music to. That old wounds/new moods lines were really great, love the word usage. I don't read/hear enough of that style of language these days :)
That reads like something you could put music to. That old wounds/new moods lines were really great, love the word usage. I don't read/hear enough of that style of language these days :)
I really appreciate you stopping by! Funny you mention putting it to music. I actually already recorded myself reading this poem (with my phone's "memo" app) and was fiddling with dSound (never uploaded there yet), and I have a few casual recordings of myself freestyle rapping. It's all morphing into its own creature, all these interests I'm discovering.
As always, thanks for the feedback :)