Thanks for attempting. This wasn't much of a freestyle though. Try formulating some ideas and take a direction and just flow with it. You don't have to be a rapper to get the formula down. But practice would definitely help. And if you really want to earn steem, then I suggest you do something you are passionate about because this entry showed you weren't really feeling it or dedicated to the craft. Conviction originality, creativity onsistency and effort attracts whale votes, I can testify to that.