Like the delivery, you put a lot of character into the verse. Gives it a little bit extra. Liked the flow and you use a lot of good vocab to keep things interesting. Good job man.

Favorite bars:
You throw a jab and you miss, you land a hook and it cracks your wrist.
I’m more stealthy and feral than what scared you shitless as a kid.

If you have time I appreciate any feedback on my post:
https://steemit.com/rapchallenge/@fraze/steemit-rap-challenge-professor-fraze