Random Games Week 4- Poetry: My own submission titled QUATRAIN
Poetry is the oldest form of creative or literal composition and it's the first genre of literature which is famous for its condescend use of words to express vast notions or ideas.
This condensation is what I am emphasizing in this submission by creating a detailed piece loaded with beauties, fancies but in a condensed way of cause (using SWEET, NIGHT, HOUR, LINK words alongside @kristyglas art work as suggested in the contest's, #randomgames guidelines) through QUATRAIN (A four line poem).
Kristyglas art work
© @kristyglas
Having gone for OPTION 3, HERE IS MY SUBMISSION.
QUATRAIN (GLEAMING GOOD GHOMMIDS)
How mellowed flapped thy wings little ghommid angels in so darkly night
For thy gleaming selves in four cool the stance of those Barbados flowers'
hands in the hour they rest the rest of 'em crimson n' sweet faces
And thy link as bond you'd formed a-air's shaped the horizon with reliance.
© Jodekss
Wow, cool poem and art! I hope you win!
Thanks for your comment. I am appreciative, highly.
I like the descriptive words you used in here. They assemble well, like a bed of flowers.
What is the meaning of "ghommid"?
The word was (first) used in THE FOREST OF A THOUSAND DAEMONS by D. O. FAGUNWA as interpreted or adapted by WOLE SOYINKA to mean STRANGE or RARE BEING or CREATURE with unique powers and mights.
Thank you for stopping by. Much love.
So beautiful! This is a hard dialect, but made easier to understand combined with the image :D
I love this line:
hands in the hour they rest the rest of 'em
crimson n' sweet faces
Can you please explain it just a little? :3
Thank you very much for participating!!
Okay! Thanks and I'll do that. 😊
By the word HANDS I am figuratively referring to the four cute little dragons 🐲 in the text or the art work there. I in that LINE alone try and imagine them as humans who REST (as in give) the REST (the remaining) of their age long beauties in their golden eyes shining so bright in crimson colour on those flowers 💐. And this shining ray from their cute SWEET faces is so glare even to an unseen beholder admiring what is happening (as in seeing how so magical and attractive the moment looks like).
These are only possible for me to imagine all because of your incredible art work @kristyglas . Thanks for the opportunity.
Thank you :D I realized it was about dragons, but the explanation helped ^-^
It really is a nice condense way of expressing a lot!
Thanks... 😊
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