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RE: Dream me

in #prose7 years ago

Amazing work as always! It just made me feel a little bit sad. The idea of the protagonist being perfect, being there to support and love her - I kinda feel like he is just a fantasy and he can't be himself, trying to be perfect for her. I don't know if I got the idea right, but it made me emotional, so I guess that it served its purpose. Have a nice day, @poet! :)

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I tried to hint about the symbiotic nature of this piece with lines like "To support you. To be supported." Saying it goes both ways.

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