My Promo-Mentors Writing Challenge

in #promomentors-challenge6 years ago (edited)

Hi! I am M Fahad Zahid,

The person who have influenced me the most in my life is my father. Actually Almost every child first hero should be his father! He is the one who acts as an invisible sheild and protect you from every difficulty without even letting you know!

I my case, He loved me the most, Fulfilled all my wishes Before they even came to my mouth.
He taught me the hubbleness and to be kind to others. learn from your mistakes, never to lose hope and never to give up!
I am really inspired from his calm personality. He tought me stay calm no matter what the circumstances are. he tought me to accept your mistakes and to make it correct instead of arguing!
He is the reason am i living right now after i was hit by a greatest tragedy of my life and lost all hope to an extent of suside! he stood beside me, faced all my difficultiest as they were His! and Gave me enough confidence to start all over again and never blamed me of what mistakes i did which lead me to that tragedy. Love u Dad! thanks for Always being there for me!

Below is something i did To make look my writing better but got caught! so realized my mistake, apologized for it and wrote everything again on my own

Hi! I Am M Fahad Zahid! and would like to nswer the Challenge Question

Describe your role models, and what they have done to inspire you

My Father is my inspiration and The most influencial person in my life. He's such a hard-working and caring man and is ultimately my backbone. He understands everything I go through and is always there for me when I need a pick-me-up. I Wish i could make him proud one day.

I look up to him in so many ways. He has always been a huge support. He has taught me to work hard and do my best but also reminds me to always have fun. He has taught me to be positive in difficult circumstances. When He has faced tough times, my dad chooses to focus on the good things and not get weighed down by the bad. He always says, "Life throws you punches, roll with it." No matter what He is dealing with, He always manages to laugh and always laughs hardest at his own jokes. Love you Papa!

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If you had made a normal entry instead of copying parts of other pieces you would had my full vote.

Stop with copying it doesn't help you. I will be watching you.

I have realized my Mistake, tried to rewrite in my own words, You can consider it if you have tendency to forgive

Apologies! I am not that good at english! Its okey! if you Cant Accept this :)

dude, are you that lazy or are you incredibly stupid?

I am not Lazy neither stupid! just not that good good at english! so i did Copy to make it look better

Hey, my reaction was harsh because English is not my native language neither but I make an effort, sometimes I spend to much time trying to bring some value to this platform, and stuff like this are very not cool. Do you know by any chance what plagiarism is? look for it. Try to write in your own language then, but dont bring here writing that are not yours and try to make others believe are yours.

You can copy / paste something as a reference, just mention your source and a link to it, that is ok.

I was reading the rest of your posts, all them plagiarism as well. Just stop doing that bro, I will follow and support if you do the right thing.

Take care.

Thanks for the reply brother! I am new in Blogging Field! Learning it! I didn't know much about plagrism.. i am trying my best to comply with The rules and regulations of Content writing! It would take time! I would appreciate if you point out mistakes on my other post so that i can rectify them!

read all the posts about @ulogs and visit #ulog. you should effort in the comment. simply read the posts I mentioned and start ULOGGING. I want to see you adjust because you showed in the comments here that you can

He might be not familiar yet with these things, as he said that he is a new comer. But ya, as you suggested, we have to give our best effort to grow up faster.

Thanks for supporting the minnows @surpassinggoogle. So far, You are the one who detected the unseen in this platform.

Anyway, I had a sad #ulog today. 😣Would be great if would like to check it.

Thanks Alot @Surpassinggoogle for suggesting me, as @fitrianizar has said, i am not familiar with lots of rules and Regulations of content writing and Plagrism as It my aprox. 10th day to this platform, I am trying hard to learn more and more to stop making such mistakes!

Can you do me a favor! Please Check My Latest post! And tell me that if it is also counted as plagrism. Link below:

https://steemit.com/health/@faady92/healthy-miracles-or-healthy-fruits-or-lemons

@faady92 don't ask people to read your posts by dropping links, it goes against steemit etiquette. Create YOUR OWN content, then it's not plagiarism. If you just modify something you found, then you're still copying it. Just for your info, people on here will see if it's copied, even if you change some words..

Thanks Alot! :) I will consider your suggestion!

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