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I agree definitely pare it down to a very quick 3 paragraph intro, with max 3 sentences a paragraph.

You need to crystal clear m ake a distinction between the token and blockchain.

For older users and neophytes I would suggest the following terminology changes.

Steem Tokens (which is the currency) and Steem Network... (yes I know it's a blockchain but it is also a social network)

And that you are using your voting dividends to pay or reward others.
Not their principle.

And all you are doing is getting their appetite wet.

Then give them a step by step sign up for a steemit account video on another page, finishing with you upvoting one of your tutorials....

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By the way you need a more appealing header and footer on your site with some memorable grabber (it will increase your stickiness), even Sourceforge and W3Schools, have appealing logos and color schemes.

And for a training site I would not put ads. for SteemMontsters, it's not your target audience. You would be better to put a poker site (not that I recommend that) because people looking for Excell tutoring are doing analysis and alot of Adults with money do analysis and play poker you'd get a way better ROI...

BTW I owned and ran VNS Inc, StatuesColumns.com, ezAutoCare.com, PopUpShop.com, AdultDecor.com, StatuesAndColumns.com, Arkahdia Arts, LowPrice4u.com for 16 years and consulted to 100s of other firms.

I presently work as a Business Operations Consultant.

So you just got some consulting work Pro-Bono ....
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